2nd Peer Review

This was the peer review that my group was originally assigned. The opening sequence wasn't completed. The opening sequence was over 5 minutes long. In addition to this, the takes weren't trimmed. You can see the group members turn the camera off and on and then begin the scene. It was extremely choppy, and not all of the angles were included. In addition to this, the lighting was bad. For some of the outdoor scenes, I couldn't see anything. It took me about 30 seconds to realize that there were people in the frame and that they were talking. Throughout the opening sequence, there was music. Because of this, I wasn't able to hear anything that the actors were saying. The music should've been lowered for these scenes. The scenes with dialogue weren't smooth. The dialogue was messed up, and the actors began to laugh. This was most likely not meant to be in the opening sequence. Group 13 also recorded the tripod. The tripod is meant to not be filmed, but it was in the background of some takes. There were also no titles. An opening sequence isn't considered an opening sequence if there are no titles. There is definitely room for improvement.