Final Pitch

 Our top two pitches are,
- In a perfect society, everyone gets a dot on their wrist on their 16th birthday. Green means you live, red means you die."
- Two girls are trying to escape their kidnappers of 3 months, but there is something the other girl doesn't know.
Pitch one is a clever idea. It will foreshadow what would happen in the movie. Our plot was to have a girl who received a red dot on her wrist. She begins to cry and blinks. The blink is a fast forward of what will happen. It is not meant to be a clear representation, but enough for the audience to understand. It will show clips of what her future holds. The video will end with the girl opening her eyes and possibly smiling. We haven't quite figured out everything. However, my partner Kaitlyn and I like this idea.
The second pitch is similar to our recent project. It's about two friends who betray another. However, in this situation, both of the girls are kidnapped. They are trying to escape while helping each other. Eventually, they escape. However, one of the girls stabs the other one. This causes them to be trapped in the room. The last shot would be the backstabber answering a phone call saying"it's done."This is an interesting plot and it leaves the audience on a cliffhanger. The audience doesn't know who the girl is working for and why she's doing this.
Kaitlyn and I decided on doing the red dot idea. We thought that it would be the most entertaining to film and watch. We are excited to begin this project. We also have a lot of ideas and plot twists for the opening credits scene.